TOEFL iBT | Independent Essay | Evaluating an Essay #6 | How to Get a 24

Send us a textHere it is, people! The last Independent Essay from my previous student who ended up achieving a 24 on her writing, giving her a grand total of 100 for her test. So, in this video/podcast, this is what a 23/24 essay would look like, but the amount of things she could have done better is staggering. Nonetheless, hear me break down each paragraph, try drawing conclusions of the 2nd body paragraph, and see if everything correlates -- which it doesn't. This is a great learning...